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Deeker's Message of the Week
January 18, 2009
A Dearth of new Stories
- Shitty writing. See my Deeker's Writing Rants page for the numerous examples of this that I see from week to week.
- The stories are too short. If you are going to write a story, try to develop a plot, establish a conflict and a resolution, take the reader on an adventure and make it worth the reader's time to explore the world you create with your words.
- Three "true accounts" that were submitted with different names but all came from the same person as shown by the IP address being the same. If the other people are your friends or brothers or other people who were using your computer, I apologize and I will post them if I am contacted to do so, but from what I could see, the three stories seemed to be nothing more than variants on the same fabricated scenario.
- Two true accounts from the same person with different outcomes. This really pegged my bullshit meter into redline territory.
- One story looked promising and had potential until I got to the part where he mentioned a girl wearing you-know-what's. This is an instant show-stopper for me and everything will grind to a sudden halt if I see this in a story. Isn't it rather plainly, blatantly in-one's-face obvious that this site is about BOYS wearing diapers?!!!
